For the 5th blog style short entry story this week,

can you please ask the writer to write something interesting and the most updated information on Climate Change problem and

please send to me before 12 March?

I recieved a comment for the last post from a classmate who was trying to show off her knowledge by stepping down other

people.she said :

" you might want to look into the 2007 Bali climate change conference and see what was achieved; it was meant to be a roadmap for after Kyoto. from what i remember, Australia finally signed the kyoto protocol and even the US was ready to commit to some kind of action plan.."

And another comment from instructor: "Remember, these are not essays we are writing, but news reports."

Attached is the good example from classmate, maybe will be useful for the writer:


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